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My favorite part of the RP.Oh and I didn't draw Smokepaw very well DX He's sopoused to be in the background.Too much grass DX

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Goldenpaw walked outside of camp.She padded to the abandoned fox den and sighed
Smokepaw looked up to see the stars, they were unusually bright tonight as he headed over to where he would meet Goldenpaw.
Goldenpaw waited.She looked up at the stars and smiled.She closed her eyes still looking up.
Smokepaw made it to the fox den but froze when he saw Goldenpaw. Her eyes were closed and she looked so at, peace.. She is so beautiful.. he thought as we watched.
Goldenpaw could smell Smokepaw and opened her eyes and looked at him "Smokepaw!Hi!"she said happily.
Smokepaw blushed and ran over to meet here. "Hey Goldenpaw!" he meowed.
Goldenpaw smiled even more "Haven't seen you in a while!How are you?"she asked
Smokepaw shivered slightly. It was starting to get colder.. "I have been great, I'll be a warrior soon. Yourself?" he asked.
"I've been good."Goldenpaw mewed "I saved another cat from a snake.I'll be a warrior soon too!"she said happily "Want to go in the den?"she asked shivering.Her short fur didn't help much with the coldness.
Smokepaw nodded and let Goldenpaw lead the way.
Goldenpaw padded into the den.
Goldenpaw smiled again."I can't wait to be a warrior"she mewed "No cat but the deputy,leader and Medicine cat can tell me what to do"
Smokepaw smiled. "Unless they are a good friend?" he asked.
"Yeah I'll listen to my good friends"she meowed
Smokepaw chuckled. "What do you think your warrior name will be?" he meowed.
"Hmmm"she mewed thinking "Maybe Goldenwhisker or Goldenheart or Goldenflower" Goldenpaw mewed "WHat about you?"
"Hmm, I think Goldenheart suits you the best." he meowed, blushing. "I-I don't know, Smokecloud or Smokestreak.."
"Those are cool names!And Goldenheart might end up my warrior name...I don't know..But I saw Bramblepaw a couple days ago..."she mewed
"We didn't argue this time"she mewed "She told me she was hunting.At night."
"Hmm." Smokepaw murmured, his eyes narrowed in thought.
"She said it was for practice but I don't know"she meowed "ANyway what do you want to do?"
"Ummm. Maybe we can go hunting?" he asked.
"I love to hunt so yes we can go hunting"Goldenpaw mewed
Smokepaw climbed out of the den and waited at the entrance for Goldenpaw. What should we hunt?he thought to himself.
Goldenpaw followed and smiled
"So, uh, do you want to fish or do you want to hunt.. You know, birds, mice, and squirrels." he asked.
"I want to hunt fish"she mewed
"Alrighty, lets head on out!" he meowed, following a path that lead to the pond nearby.
She followed him
Once they made it over Smokepaw turned. "You remember everything I taught you, right?" he asked.
Once they made it over Smokepaw turned. "You remember everything I taught you, right?" he asked.
Smokepaw nodded. "Ask me if you forget something." he meowed as he sat down close to the waters edge.
"Okay"she mewed sitting at the water's edge beside him.She saw a fish and quickly swiped with a paw bringing it out of the water and hurryingly(I made up an awesome word : D!XD) bit it.
Smokepaw jumped back, surprised that Goldenpaw grabbed the fish so hurryingly.
"I've been practicing"she mewed
"I can tell you have!" Smokepaw said, impressed. "Your already better than me!"
"Better then a RippleClan cat at fishing?Psh no way!"she mewed "I almost always get hit in the face with their tails.I just got lucky"
Smokepaw laughed. "You have no idea, you are just.. Amazing." he meowed, blushing.
I'm not that amazing"she meowed blushing too.
"N-no, Goldenpaw, your the most a-amazing cat I have ever met.." he meowed.
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Oh my goodness this is so awesome! ;w;